In my argument synthesis review, I plan on revising my organization. Aaron suggested that I move some paragraphs around, and I believe that this sound advice. Aaron also said that I have too much support in my paper. In order to adress this issue, I will reduce the number of song lyrics I have in the paper. It is clear that Conor Oberst's music is politically involved by focusing on just two or three songs instead of six. This will make my paper flow better because readers will not be distracted by the huge number of songs included in it. The third thing Aaron suggested I do is remove the discussion of Oberst's New York apartment. Due to the fact that this is my counterargument, I cannot remove this section. However, I will work to make it clearer so that the fact that it is counterargument is more obvious.