When I revise my review paper, I plan to focus more on Aaron's strengths in his paper. He wrote a very good paper, and I want to make sure he knows that. I will add a conclusion that briefly states what he needs to change and praises his strengths in the paper. I plan to mention his use of photographs, as I feel that really enhanced his paper. I will also proofread my paper and edit basic errors as I did not have a chance to do that yet.